Hi,I got only 40 out of 100 for the Assignment 1 and I am ve

Hi,I got only 40 out of 100 for the Assignment 1 and I am very concerned that I may get low marks for Assignment 2 also.The assignment due date is 18th April 2015 at 3:00 PM (UK Time).Kindly check the draft version of Assignment 2. Download it herePlease note that I am not expecting you just to check grammar and simple things, I am expecting you to make significant changes, especially in the introduction, structure of the paper and conclusion. I want to revise the paper very carefully, Please help to get at least 80 in this assignment so that my overall score is improved.Please try to add more and more academic references. Harvard referencing has to be usedPlease check the attached assignment brief and pay attention to the marking guide.